tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9214423553546530092.post5232047452895710306..comments2016-02-12T16:03:50.696-08:00Comments on Pepys' Wife: Love Bites - Anti-Valentine Blog Hop 2014 Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02648759079189853113noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9214423553546530092.post-31720182320057493832016-02-12T16:03:50.696-08:002016-02-12T16:03:50.696-08:00I guess I'm alone then when I say I found it a...I guess I'm alone then when I say I found it amusing not sad? You've got a deft hand for dialogue which is easily the hardest to write well. And harder yet to write AS well. Looking forward to the next instalment. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18276459074130913340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9214423553546530092.post-23078733510127575932014-02-13T01:39:19.425-08:002014-02-13T01:39:19.425-08:00Arh you last comment just pre-empted what I was go...Arh you last comment just pre-empted what I was going to say, which is, I wonder what caused her to do that! I didn't feel sorry enough for him - but maybe I'm too cynical! LOL Great piece. Miranda Katehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11166000575283710451noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9214423553546530092.post-90216825159956152942014-02-12T14:07:40.283-08:002014-02-12T14:07:40.283-08:00In the longer version of the story I tell her side...In the longer version of the story I tell her side too. He was a piece of work as well. :-) Thanks for reading it, Lisa.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02648759079189853113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9214423553546530092.post-73592799897385597492014-02-12T13:54:29.597-08:002014-02-12T13:54:29.597-08:00Great dialogue...she was a piece of work, hope he ...Great dialogue...she was a piece of work, hope he can shrug it off and start again! Lisa Shambrookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12767127776898278402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9214423553546530092.post-87803824669116488412014-02-12T13:24:25.996-08:002014-02-12T13:24:25.996-08:00She really did, Lizzie! That wasn't an embelli...She really did, Lizzie! That wasn't an embellishment. Thank you for reading it. :-) xxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02648759079189853113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9214423553546530092.post-25222949734237579462014-02-12T12:33:10.050-08:002014-02-12T12:33:10.050-08:00Oh my gosh! That is sooo sad! Taking the coat off ...Oh my gosh! That is sooo sad! Taking the coat off his back? That's just heartless and he's better off without her. Great story Chick. xxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9214423553546530092.post-8123515974782643942014-02-12T09:19:27.336-08:002014-02-12T09:19:27.336-08:00Why, thank you! Couldn't write about hearts an...Why, thank you! Couldn't write about hearts and flowers for a project called "Love Bites". ;-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02648759079189853113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9214423553546530092.post-2548913330232386642014-02-12T09:08:22.423-08:002014-02-12T09:08:22.423-08:00Oh, so sad. But wonderfully done!Oh, so sad. But wonderfully done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9214423553546530092.post-26051902404149515672014-02-12T07:02:12.768-08:002014-02-12T07:02:12.768-08:00I think it happens more often than we think, alas!...I think it happens more often than we think, alas! Thank you for taking the time to read it, Sarah.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02648759079189853113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9214423553546530092.post-22950869198019371642014-02-12T07:01:30.590-08:002014-02-12T07:01:30.590-08:00The longer version isn't as sad and in RL he w...The longer version isn't as sad and in RL he was quite Zen about the whole thing. He was actually a pretty happy guy with a sad story. Thanks for reading, Becky!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02648759079189853113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9214423553546530092.post-36348269807628021402014-02-12T06:13:47.904-08:002014-02-12T06:13:47.904-08:00That's really sad. :-( The thing is, I can se...That's really sad. :-( The thing is, I can see something similar (maybe not to that extreme) happening between some couples. Nice job!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17068940312195977839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9214423553546530092.post-86627371518048426942014-02-12T05:37:00.525-08:002014-02-12T05:37:00.525-08:00Wow. That's such a sad story! I loved all of t...Wow. That's such a sad story! I loved all of the detail included. You oput me right there listening to him tell his story. :)Becky Fyfehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01595020500346331076noreply@blogger.com